专八改错练习第十一篇：

In department stores and closets all over the world,they are
waiting. Their outward appearance seems ratherappealing since __1__
they come in a variety of styles, textures, and colors.
And they are ultimately the biggest deception thatexists in the __2__
fashionable industry today. What are they? They arehigh heels __3__
--woman’s worst enemy ( whether she knows it or not). High heel __4__
shoes are the downfall of modern society. Fashion myths have led
women to believe that they are more beautiful or sophisticating __5__
for wearing heels, but in reality, heels succeed on posing short as __6__
as well as long term hardships. Women should fight the high hell
industry by refusing to use or purchase them in order to save the
world of unnecessary physical and psychological suffering. __7__
For the sake of fairness, it must be noted that there is a positive
side to high heels. First, heels are excellent for aerating lawns.
Anyone who has ever worn heels on grass know what I am talking __8__
about. A simple trip around the yard on a pair of those babies __9__
eliminates all needs to call for a lawn care specialist, and provides __10__
the perfect-sized holes to give any lawn oxygen without all those
messy chunks of dirt lying around.

参考答案(反白可见)：
改为because或者for
当since表示原因时，它往往出现在句子的开头而非中间。
2.And改为But
从与上一段的关系看来，这里是转折而不是承接。
nable改为fashion
fashionable是形容词表示“时尚的，时髦的”，而这里所指的是“时尚产业”，所以应该用它的名词形式。
前加上a或者woman改为women
可数名词单数形式前面必须加冠词，因此这里须加上a，或者将woman变成服侍形式表类指。
ticating改为sophisticated
改为in
succeed 与介词in连用，后面加动词ing形式。如：
We have already succeeded in working out ground rules with the Department ofDefense.
改为from
save sb from doing sth 表示“避免某人做某事”。
改为knows
主语和谓语在形式上须一致，anyone在语义上表达的是单数含义。
改为in
英语表示穿戴往往用介词in。
改为need
尽管need前用了all来限定，但need所指的是“叫来草坪护理专家”这单一的含义，因此应该用单数，all在这里只是起到强调的作用