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Ancient man attempted to change the weather by using magic. While experience taught him this was impossible, __1__ 
he tried to forecast weather conditions. Even earlier in __2__
1000 B.C. there were weather seers in Babylon----and priests clever enough to denounce as frauds those predicted __3__
the weather a year in the advance. Some forecasters used __4__
methods that seemed to take no connection with the actual __5__
factors controlled the weather. Chickens and other animals __6__
were sacrificed and their intestines poked to find signs indicating rain and drought. Somewhat more scientific were __7__
predictions based on vegetation:"Onion's skin very thin ,mild weather coming in. Onion's skin thick and tough, coming weather is cold and rough."
Insects and animals were also __8__
favorite weather clues: "Before the glowworm lights his __9__
lamp , then the air is always damp ." "If spiders their cobwebs forsake , the weather will for certain break." "If frogs remained in pools , the weather will be fine . If they were seen on rocks, __10__
rain and cold were due." It's difficult to say whether this rhyme should be taken seriously : " Hark , I hear the asses bray . Me thinks we'll have some rain today ."

答案详解(反白可见，按ctrl+A)：

1.While—When或After.本句的this指代的是to change the weather by using magic. when/after 引导时间状语
是early的比较级，其后应有than
之后加引导定语从句
4. 删除advance前的 advance为习语
5. take— connection with 为习语
6. controlled—controlling或在controlled前加that/lling the weather 或that/which controlled the weather做定语修饰the actual factors
7. and—和draught只能是二者之一
8. 删除is.与上文平衡，均为省略句
9. before—when/if.条件句
10. will—引导的是条件句用的是remained一般过去时