四级写作这次还是出得没什么新意，还是结合生活的细节事情来命题，考“过度包装”。其实徐可风认为这也怪不了命题的兄弟，毕竟四六级的命题也就是那些套路了，用多了，自然就很难再创新了。“过度包装”这种现象可风倒是常常看到，例如朋友中秋送的月饼啊，那月饼盒包装得比无比奢华，比骨灰盒还奢华。

命题还是按照“描述现象”“分析原因”“建议措施”这老掉牙的三板斧，尽管老套，那也是“斧斧”生辉。（突然看到韩国再次扣押我国渔船的新闻，先鄙视一下）考前的YY里已经把最有效的方式给了大家，就照写吧（佛祖会保佑信文都的孩子的！）。昨天微博（新浪，腾讯）再次针对具体写作的思路内容给出了建议，不负众望，也有部分内容命中。

下面徐可风就结合考前给出的模式，加上考前徐可风的预测内容，按照四级阅卷要求，写一份符合四级阅卷要求的的考场参考文章，以供参考。

① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.

② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.

③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.

① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.

③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.

④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon.

① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.

② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.

③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging.

④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.