改错Part ⅣError Correction (15 minutes)

Directions: This part consists of a short passage. In the passage there are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to change a word, add a word or delete a word. If you change a word, cross it out and write the correct word in the corresponding blank. If you add a word, put an insertion　mark(∧)in the right place and write the missing word in the blank. If you delete a word, cross it out and put a slash(/)in the blank.

The place of the child in society has varied for thousands of years and has been effected by different cultures and religions. In ancient times unwanted children were occasionally abandoned, put to death, exploiting or offered for religious sacrifices, and in any event a large percentage of them didn’t survive their physically hazardous existence to reach to maturity.

In western civilization within the last few hundred years, there have been many changes in attitude with the young. In agricultural Europe, and later with the beginning of the Industrial Revolution, the children of the poor work long hours for little or no pay, and there was no public concern on their safety or welfare punishment could be brutal and severe.

By the eighteenth century the harsh and severe methods began to show any change. Society slowly accorded(给予) children a role of importance. Books were written expressly for them and gradually laws were passing for their protection. Efforts were made to create for them a life better than their parents!

In the past few decades parents have become more and more attentive for the needs of their children.Better health care is available and education is no longer reserving for the children from wealthy families.

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几千年来，孩子在社会的地位不尽相同，这主要是受不同文化和宗教的影响。在古代，不想要的孩子有时被抛弃，被处死，被剥削，甚至被用作宗教祭品。在近几百年来，在西方对孩子态度有了很大的改变，但孩子们经常长时间工作而得到很少或几乎没有报酬。直到最近，才有法律保护未成年人，使得他们有接受医疗和教育的机会。

71. 【参考答 案】effected→affected

【解题技巧】词性错误。

【详细解答】effect 是名词，影响，而此处需要动词，因此改作affect v.

72. 【参考答 案】exploiting→exploited

【解题技巧】语态错误。

【详细解答】此处需要被动语态，因为孩子们是被剥削。 

73. 【参考答 案】to→ t

【解题技巧】及物动词用法错误。

【详细解答】reach 是及物动词，后应接宾语，而不需要介词。 

74. 【参考答 案】with→toward

【解题技巧】介词搭配错误。

【详细解答】attitude 后接介词toward。 

75. 【参考答 案】work→worked

【解题技巧】时态错误。

【详细解答】此处应用一般现在时才符合全篇的安排。 

76. 【参考答 案】on→for

【解题技巧】介词搭配错误。

【详细解答】concern 后接for 表示“对…表示关注” 

77. 【参考答 案】any→some

【解题技巧】词语用法错误。

【详细解答】any只用于疑问句和否定句，而some 一般用于肯定句。 

78. 【参考答 案】passing→passed

【解题技巧】语态错误。

【详细解答】此处需要被动语态，而不是主动语态。 

79. 【参考答 案】for→to

【解题技巧】介词固定搭配。

【详细解答】attentive 后接介词to。 

80. 【参考答 案】reserving→reserved

【解题技巧】语态错误。

【详细解答】此处需要被动语态。