2021年6月四级写作解析

这次四级写作难度适中，主题偏科技，包括网络游戏中的暴力场景对现实行为的影响，对电脑或科技的过度依赖。属于问题类话题。考生可以从列举现象，分析原因，给出解决办法3方面来写。

作文采用了老师在直播中一再强调的三步走（总分总）的写作框架。第一段引出现象，提出观点；第二段分析原因或给出解决方法；第三段总结概括。

这里是一篇范文供大家参考。

Nowadays, there has been a heated debate over whether violence depicted in video games can trigger real-world violence. Views on the topic vary greatly. Some believe that video games are harmless, but others are concerned that it might lead to violent behaviors among youngsters.

I agree with the latter, and there are two major reasons. Firstly, unlike TV or books, video games are more interactive, thus those who play video games are more likely to be fully engaged, so they probably are unable to tell the difference between the virtual world and the reality. Secondly, children are not as self-disciplined as adults, video games with violence contents can have negative effects on their developing minds. It is possible that they get aggressive in real life.

From my perspective, it is crucial that the government should regulate the production and sale of violent video games. What’s more, parents should play an active role in creating a healthy environment for their children. Only by doing so can we ensure the healthy development of children.

范文使用了老师讲过的框架。划线部分是可以套用的模板，大家根据话题把要展开的内容填补进去就可以了。要注意过渡句的适当调整，比如，中间段如果是解决方法的话，就可以把reasons修改为solutions。

以上，祝大家能够取得理想的成绩。