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01 图画作文：人生哲理

Directions: 

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on confidence. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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点睛范文：

As we can see from the picture, in a residential community with a television antenna on the roof, an upset young man is talking to his friend walking beside him along the street. It is apparent that the former assumes that someone else is more qualified than him.

Superficially, it seems to be somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in the mind, we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the lack of confidence. Firstly, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Secondly, attitude is the key point to take the first step. Assuming bravery and confidence to solve the problem, you will find the question is not as “huge” as you imagine.

On the whole, I believe we young people should face the difficulties in the right manner. And nothing is impossible, just do it.

参考译文：

如图所示，在一个屋顶架起电视天线的住宅小区，一个沮丧的年轻人正在和沿着街道走 在身旁的一个朋友聊天。显而易见，前者认为别人比自己能力更强。

表面上看，这幅图画似乎有一些道理，但当我们仔细思考时，我们就会发现在这个现象 之下有一个明显的趋势：缺乏自信。首先，众所周知，我们生活在一个充满各种困难的多元 化世界。我们别无选择，只能面对。其次，态度是采取第一步的关键。拥有勇气和信心来解 决问题，你就会发现问题并非你想象的那么“严重”。

总而言之，我认为我们年轻人应该以正确的方式面对困难。世上无难事，只怕有心人。

句型拓展：

1.It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them. 显而易见，他们两个人都夸大了面前的困难。

2.This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now. 这幅图画确实反映了一个目前在中国很普遍同时发人深思的社会现象。

3.Take us for example, the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to be a horrible monster before us. 以我们自己为例，研究生入学考试似乎是我们面前的一个可怕的怪物。

02 图表作文：教育

Directions: 

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the chart below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the chart and then give your comments. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

某高校学生兼职情况

点睛范文：     

The column chart clearly reveals the statistics of students taking part-time jobs in a certain university. According to the survey, there has been a steady increase from 67.77% to 71.93% for students holding temporary jobs from freshmen to juniors, while the percentage of seniors working part-time jumped markedly to 88.24%. 

The most obvious way that having a part-time job can adversely affect students ’ studies is by becoming a drain on the their time. Another way that part time employment can be detrimental to students is by reducing the perceived incentive to study. Despite presenting certain pitfalls, working part-time throughout my time at university also offer several potential benefits. For one, it can help students to better understand their preferences or to “test out” a possible career direction. Additionally, companies seeking to recruit recent grads will give preference to those with real-world experience. 

In the end, the impact of a part-time job on a student's academic career depends on the student’s ability to maintain focus and balance his or her own time.

参考译文：

这幅柱状图清晰显示了某高校学生兼职情况的数据。根据调查，从大一到大三，兼职 学生从 67.77%缓慢上升到 71.93%，而大四兼职学生的百分比则急剧上升到 88.24%。

兼职影响学业的主要问题就是耽误时间。不利影响的另一方面就是会减少学生已有的 学习动力。尽管提到了某些弊端，但在大学阶段做兼职还是有很多好处的。首先，兼职能让 学生更好地了解自己的喜好或检验一种可能的职业方向。其次，那些招聘新近毕业生的公司 都会偏爱有实际社会经验的大学生。

总之，兼职对大学生学业是否有影响取决于他们能否分清重点及平衡时间。

句型拓展：

1.There is a recognition that a candidate with a master’s degree will have a competitive advantage over those with only a bachelor’s degree.普遍公认硕士学位候选人将比那些只 有学士学位的人拥有明显的优势。

2.This is inevitable because ours is a society where one’s income is still determined by the knowledge you possess.由于我们社会中一个人的收入仍然由你所拥有的知识所决定，因此 这一点不可避免。

3. With the growing number of college graduates being turned out each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter.随着每年毕业的大学毕业生越来 越多，就业市场的形势越来越严峻。

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