独创wordmap词汇学习法的英语讲师 金卓(查看主页>>)
英语讲师,十年教学经验。擅长词汇和写作,具有丰富的四六级和考研英语培训经验,独创wordmap词汇学习法。了解学生心理,热心解答学生疑惑。
以下为金卓老师为大家分享的四六级写作方法。
英语四六级作文表达
作文 第一段:介绍现象 (3句,主题句(时间+事件+地点) + 支撑句(数据or 举例 or 两者结合) + 自然收尾(第三句若没有把握,也可酌情省略)
时间:当前,最近 Recently,Presently,Currently,Nowadays
过去,Over/In the past decades , In the past (此时的事件里可用 used to do)
事件:好事:受到青睐。XXX has gained more and more popularity
坏事:引起关注。XXX has aroused more and more people's concern
the phenomenon that ... has aroused more and more people's concern
中性:成为普遍现象 XXX has become a very common phenomenon
地点、人物:在国内大学里 at domestic universities and colleges
在人们的日常生活里 in people‘s daily life
在我们的社会里 in our society
在青年人中 among young people 在家长中间 among parents
尤其是白领和大学生 especially white collars and college students
数据支撑: 根据最新的一个调查 According to a latest survey
根据一个最新的在1000名大学生中所做的调查 According to a latest survey of 1000 college students
相关数据显示:Related statistics show that ...
举例支撑:XXX 涵盖了很多方面,从……到……
It covers a lot of aspects ranging from ... to ...
其他备用表达:各种各样的,a variety of,a diversity of 一系列,a series of 丰富大量的,an abundance of 包含很多方面,aspects 领域 fields 给人们提供了很多方便和娱乐 provide a lot of convenience and entertainment for us. … 在人们的生活中占据重要的地位 play a profoundly important role in people's life
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举例:高校排名在当今社会很流行。(2010年作文)
(时间)Recently,(事件)XXX(university rankings) have gained more and more popularity (地点)in our society,especially among parents and high school students.
(举例法)These rankings cover a variety of aspects ranging from teaching facilities to the job prospects of graduates.
(数据法)According to a latest survey in 1000 parents, around 80% of them say they would take related rankings into consideration before they decide which school their children should enter.
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Google上一篇英语作者的文章开头两句话(现象+数据支撑)
More and more parents are allowing their pre-teen children to join social media platforms despite age restriction and danger of being exposed to objectionable content. According to a poll of 1,000 adults conducted by Liberty Mutual's Responsibility Project, around 17 percent of parents claimed that they had no problem with their pre-teen child using social media platforms, compared to 8 percent of the parents a year ago.
第二段:分析原因,利弊(6-7句,主题句 + 观点1 + 支撑 + 观点2 + 支撑。也可酌情写三个观点)
1. “某人做某事”是出于以下三个原因。 (真题:学生不重视拼写的原因,学生出于不同的原因选择选修课)
学生会考虑以下几个因素,在做某事的时候。 (真题:学生选老师时考虑的因素)
我们可以从……当中得到诸多益处。首先,它对我们的学习有积极的影响。可以帮助我们开拓眼界,丰富我们的人生和阅历,为将来的工作打下坚实的基础,让我们的大学生活更加的丰富,精彩。提高了我们的工作效率。其次,我们可以有机会去和别人接触和交流。有助于提高我们的社交能力。
1. People do sth for the following three reasons. First, Second, Third (Last but not the least)
Students would take the following three factors into consideration when they…
We can benefit a lot from … First, it has a positive influence on our study. It helps us broaden/widen our horizon, enrich our life and knowledge, lay a solid foundation for our future work, make our college life more colorful and wonderful, helps to improve people’s work efficiency. Second, we can have opportunities / chances to contact and communicate with others and improve our social skills.(promote, strengthen, enhance)
2. ****可能会引起一些列的问题。(预测:过度上网可能引起一些列的问题。)
首先,它对我们的健康有极其不好的影响(威胁到我们的健康)。其次,它影响我们的效率,让我们无法集中精力在工作和学习上。再次,它影响了我们和他人交际的能力。(这里只有 主题 + 观点123,没有支撑的部分,大家自己酌情补充)
***may cause a series of problems. ***may give rise to a series of unpleasant / undesirable consequences. First, it has an extremely negative effect on our health, both physical and mental.(threaten) Second, it affects our efficiency and make us fail to concentrate on our work and study. Third (Last but not the least,) it undermines our ability to communicate with others.
3. 任何事物都有两面性,****也不例外。(或者:***是一把双刃剑,它既有好处,也有坏处)一方面(好处,有助于),另一方面(坏处,影响了)
Everything has two sides —— *** is no exception. *** is a double-edged sword ---- it has both advantages and disadvantages.(---- it can be both a blessing and a curse.) On the one hand, …. On the other hand,…
第三段 你的看法,建议(3句左右,自然收尾,可准备一些套话,考试时择机使用。尤其注意第一句不要写错。)
1. 就我个人来说,我认为我们应该用一个理性的态度来对待****。我们要分清它的好处和坏处,合理的利用它。我们在做某事之前,要考虑它的好坏两个方面。
Personally,in my view, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, I suggest that we should have a rational attitude to … we need to distinguish between its advantages and disadvantages。We should take both its positive and negative sides into consideration before we do sth.
2. 为了改变这个局面,我们必须采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。(鉴于它的影响,我们必须找到解决的方案)
(要解决这个问题,需要学校和学生的共同努力。一方面,学校应该制定一些规章制度来惩罚,来预防。。。另一方面,学生要加强自己的诚信,自律意识。)
To change this situation, we must take some effective measures and actions to solve the problem.
(Considering its bad influence, we must find some solutions to it.)
(To solve the problem needs the joint efforts of both school and students. On the one hand, school should establish a system or make some rules and regulations to punish / prevent … On the other hand, students should raise their awareness of honesty and self-control)
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