要点：

1，“小公园里撒满了阳光”即“小公园沐浴在阳光下”译为the small park was bathed in sunshine，be bathed in形象地再现了当时的情形，《张》中还给出了另一种译法，Yesterday, lots of kids and elderly folks enjoyed themselves very much in the sun drenched small park

2，“只有一个人裹着大衣低头独自行走”多动词句，此处译者巧妙地将“独自行走”转译为名词walker，大大精简了句式，相似的例子还有《古城》中“那是一只灰色的铁鸟。对这古城，它不是完全陌生的。”译为That was a grey iron bird by no means a stranger to ancient city.此处将“陌生”转译为名词~

要点：

1，“…等待明天的太阳”即“直到第二天太阳升起”译为until the sun reappears the next day.

2，“’夕阳无限好’是千 古名句”译为“The setting sun shines with unrivalled splendor” is a celebrated line from an ancient Chinese poem.其中把“千古”译为from an ancient Chinese poem,带有解释性，交代此名句来自一句中国古诗

3，“等着看日出”即“渴望着/盼望着日出”译为long for sunrise

4， “太阳控制着人们的健康，生死存亡”，此处的“控制”宜理解为“与…有关”或“决定”因此译为The sun has much to do with our health and determines our life or death, survival or extinction.

综述：

注意某些动词的理解“控制”并非控制，“等待”也没有译为waiting，注意结合语境灵活运用~

要点：

1，“人们看太阳，观赏其红、光、亮”即“人们欣赏太阳的红，光，亮”译为People look at the sun and admire its glow, light and brilliance.

2，“有了电灯，还爱灯笼”即“在发明了电灯之后还继续爱着灯笼” 译为continue to love the lantern when they have the electric lamp

3，“令人崇拜”译为have the worship of all

4，“太阳是唯一”译时，采用增词法，译为The sun is the sole ball of fire in the sky.或The sun is the only fiery celestial body.

5,“惟一往往被尊为最伟大”译为Anything that is the only one of its kind is often held up as great.其中把“唯一”译为the only one of its kind,也采用了增词法，此处“尊为”译为to hold up,意为“提出，推举”，另外“尊为”也可译be revered/admired/respected as

综述：依旧是重在上下文的理解~

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1，“赤日炎炎的酷暑”译为sweltering summer days，swelter用于天气，表示“炎热”，之前我们总结过各种“笑”，各种“走”，各种“胖”，此处得各种“热”也是值得注意的，其他表示“炎热”的词还有searing,scorching,blistering

2,“那点迷人的光”即“那迷人的黯淡光芒”译为its enchanting pale light

3，“太阳我行我素，永远这样放光芒，它一样对待…”译为the sun goes on doing whatever it pleases, always shining on all alike，“我行我素”译为doing whatever it pleases，alike意同equally

4,此处“无比强烈的”意为“无所不能的”，译为all-power

综述：

本篇散文中文看似简单，但在某些词汇的理解和翻译，需要我们多多揣摩，注意联系上下文哦~